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Neave is no cultivator, and if he can have his way, he never will be. His desperate struggle to... Read more Neave is no cultivator, and if he can have his way, he never will be. His desperate struggle to free himself from his father's grasp eventually leads him to a book. A cursed tome he shouldn't have touched. After being trapped in a hellish time loop for umpteen years, he is finally free.Oblivious to the horrors he had dragged outside.Unaware of the apocalypse he would become. Collapse Accelerated Growth, Alchemy, Anti-social Protagonist, Antihero Protagonist, Apocalypse, Arrogant Characters, Blacksmith, Body Tempering, Cannibalism, Character Growth, Child Protagonist, Crazy Protagonist, Loner Protagonist, Mind Break, Quirky Characters, Revenge, Skill Assimilation, Skill Creation, Special Abilities, Sudden Strength Gain, Time Loop, Trickster, Weak to Strong, High Fantasy, Secret Identity Super entretenida ! Disappointment. :( I'm currently at chapter 41 so far it's pretty good but too edgy and the MC is dumb as a rock even for a kid. 6/10 Chapter 90 review [dropped]Story Development - 2 starWriting Quality - 4 starsWorld Background - 1 starCharacter Design - 1 star Overall rating - 3/10It’s impressive how good this author is at killing his own novel, and I’m here to tell you why this novel is bad post chapter 30ish.ProgressionThe author is a large fan of redundant progression, the main character might get a new power or learn something cool, only for it to be thrown away in a heart beat. This becomes very apparent chapter 40+ ish. SpoilerThe whole cultivator style novel that the author is trying to build also falls apart very fast, with the mc originally being an fanciful scholar, turned into a crazed meat head who uses brute force for each and every thing. His experiments and power ups also get f#cked up, with him apparating new powers from nowhere. The main power he uses also makes very little sense, having a pathetic excuse for an origin.Main Character The main character is l a very large power trip, whose only flaws are his morality, youth, and seeming tendency to death, making an problem that gets fixed nearly immediately and making a goal that also becomes fixed nearly immediately. Mentally instable over powered characters are another story all together. In series like One punch, it’s often the supporting characters who make up for a poor main character but… Side CharactersThis author doesn’t know how to write people. The side characters are introduced, then torn apart. None of them hold substance and only some of the enemies are interesting but that’s only because they’re still mysterious.WorldIt takes talent to make an uninteresting world and an even more uninteresting future plot. The Author alludes to something that probably won’t appear for another real world year, and then he shows us a feeble world made by feeble supporting characters. The author makes people places and things, however he adds no depth to any of it, leaving little to imagine. A large part of what makes a book good is how much there is for you to make yourself, however that doesn’t mean that you don’t talk about it at all. It’s almost like the author abhors describing what the mc sees to us if it doesn’t involve his funky little power fantasy.Side note : I wish I knew what was going through the authors mind when he made the title.Excuse my tone towards the end, I was getting annoyed at how bad the world was The title feels like some idea he had when the guy is in the realm making shit jokes to the demons Quote: INeedMoneythere is a cool novel on the webnovel "The human giant" don't know where to read it? can't find it on pirate sitesOh do you mean The Giant Who Practices Martial Arts It's a really good and dark novel, but I don't know its last chapter, it's only 35. Is there more? Webnovel have 190+ im reading 40 free chapter One of the most ridiculous novels I've ever read. Quote: BondarantIt should be around ch 30-50 the time he gets out of that book, also all of his opponents get buffed to death because of how OP he was, but i'm not sure if that continues, read at your own risk.I’m at ch 195 it’s basically the only thing I spend coins on at Webnovel. It gets better and he’s still op he’s mainly combining the different paths of power to become op and is really just facing things way above his level if he stuck to just one path. I’d go back and check it out again. What’s the name of the novel there is a cool novel on the webnovel "The human giant" don't know where to read it? can't find it on pirate sites its not popular enough to get pirated, it got like only 16 comments even after nearly 200 chapters I don't know, I only comment on shitty novels Oh the guy with a pet goat? The guy who practices the golem martial arts with his system called second best system? Yeah it's actually good (I'm in 189 chapter btw) but the flaws i found in that novel was the pacing and the constant misspellings in grammar.. Anyway if it's added here or in panda I'll probably rate it from 4.2★ to 4.5★ It's on panda novel It was ok in the 1st season but in the 2s he gets nerfed, i just dropped it there. Which chapter does that happen? It should be around ch 30-50 the time he gets out of that book, also all of his opponents get buffed to death because of how OP he was, but i'm not sure if that continues, read at your own risk. Anyone know something like this it could be wish making novel just it gotta have interesting powers for the Mc This is bad.Rank E(edited)Obs: Don't forget to downvote me ╰⁠(⁠ ⁠・⁠ ⁠ᗜ⁠ ⁠・⁠ ⁠)⁠➝ can you change it to E coz your rating look like a ***** doing ***** OK. i was joking 😂 but I already changed(⁠?⁠・⁠・⁠)⁠σ